darac.livejournal.com ([identity profile] darac.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] graafen 2008-06-12 06:26 pm (UTC)

I'm not entirely sure about the finger clicking. I kind of makes you look like Foxy Cleopatra or someone like that. "Oh, no you d'int, Girlfriend. *snap snap snap*"

But otherwise, very nice. The proper Robocop/DOS commands (why Robocop ran DOS we shall never know. Maybe that was where his problems lay), the "tracking" effects are good. Perhaps some random boxes on your face in the early stages would be good, too. Y'know, spotting the face, tracking the eyes. If you want to get really fancy, clone your mouth into a little box in the corner. Just some little things to imply that "The Computer is Thinking..."

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