http://accordion-hero.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] accordion-hero.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] graafen 2009-02-23 05:01 am (UTC)

pretty good! I'd add more flash considering you're in a dark corridor (and ramp the volume up). You could also add the tingling sound effect for brass shells hitting the ground. :)

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